Sneek peek of Island of Mysteries By Ducky
Chapter 1
The big trip
Hooray! The Schools were closed because there was too much snow, but we had to go to another School. The reason I’m saying hooray is we have to go on a cruise ship to get to the school. I can’t wait, witch is good be comes the bus to the cruise ship. “Honey come down your bus is here “said mom. “I know,” I said. So I went down. When I got to the bus I saw my friend Gilbert but he was not sitting next to the window witch he always does. When the doors closed the bus driver yelled “Filps Phinigen!”
UH – OH this must be bad the reason I thought that was because Gilbert and I always prank the bus drivers. But we never pranked this one! What would he want with me? I wonder if he saw my purmnit recored, but I went up, I thought he was going to give me a lecture or something, but instead he gave me a me letter that said my name and top secret on it.When I opended the letter I found a secret mellage on it. I had no clue what it ment, so I went to sit down on the three seated seat with Gilbert. I asked him if he got the letter that I got, he did. So I figured the letter was just a fun fact thing. Then I looked around the bus and I saw a adult holding a news paper, he had some sort of uniform on.
It din’t make any sence that Gilbert was not sitting next to the window, I mean no one was sitting there.
By the time we were at the Cruise ship I had to ask him, “Gilbert why aren’t you sitting next to the window?!” I blurted out. But he did not here me because he was reading Ocean comic Book. Latter he put the book away and everybody got of the bus.
The big trip
Hooray! The Schools were closed because there was too much snow, but we had to go to another School. The reason I’m saying hooray is we have to go on a cruise ship to get to the school. I can’t wait, witch is good be comes the bus to the cruise ship. “Honey come down your bus is here “said mom. “I know,” I said. So I went down. When I got to the bus I saw my friend Gilbert but he was not sitting next to the window witch he always does. When the doors closed the bus driver yelled “Filps Phinigen!”
UH – OH this must be bad the reason I thought that was because Gilbert and I always prank the bus drivers. But we never pranked this one! What would he want with me? I wonder if he saw my purmnit recored, but I went up, I thought he was going to give me a lecture or something, but instead he gave me a me letter that said my name and top secret on it.When I opended the letter I found a secret mellage on it. I had no clue what it ment, so I went to sit down on the three seated seat with Gilbert. I asked him if he got the letter that I got, he did. So I figured the letter was just a fun fact thing. Then I looked around the bus and I saw a adult holding a news paper, he had some sort of uniform on.
It din’t make any sence that Gilbert was not sitting next to the window, I mean no one was sitting there.
By the time we were at the Cruise ship I had to ask him, “Gilbert why aren’t you sitting next to the window?!” I blurted out. But he did not here me because he was reading Ocean comic Book. Latter he put the book away and everybody got of the bus.
posted by ducky @ 1:27 PM
5 Comments
5 Comments:
this is just chapter 1 of my good book but it might be a series. if it does not get published i will put it all on my web. but the chances are that it is going to be a hit new series writen by my a 12 year old boy and i would of started it at age 11. whell i hope u like part 1. and i mite give a book or 2 away if it is made into a book oh yea i know what the mistory bag is!
and i am a 12 year old writer that has lodes of ideas so tell all of your fridnds about my web but no one can copy my story or i wil sue you know the people that steal peoples stories a think that is horibul! whel hope u like the story i said again.
dount say what my real name is ok?
good!
i am so sorry do not never go to my other web site i made a mistake and now i cant log back in if anyone can help me delete it that would be verey asome but please tell me and email me so you can help if u can thank you so much
O.K. NOW I'm wondering what happens next! This is a great start to a mystery. I hope there is a lot of adventure to follow. Will there be any music in the story? Maybe one of the characters can play an instrument and that makes a difference to solving the mystery. I like this a lot.
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